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More artists: Brian O’Doherty lecture on Hopper’s Windows

Currently there is an exhibition of Edward Hopper’s works at the Whitney Museum of American Art. It focuses on Hopper’s artistic process, how he proceeded from initial studies in drawings and watercolour to final painting. I’ve been there a few weeks earlier and have commented on the visit in the context of coursework for OCA Drawing 1.

Today I went to the Museum to attend a lecture by Brian O’Doherty, titled “Hopper’s Windows”. Brian O’Doherty became friends with Edward Hopper in the 1960s when he asked to interview him for his TV show featuring contemporary artists. He’s the author of a film based on that TV interview. I had hoped the film would be presented but instead O’Doherty talked about the topic of windows in Hopper’s work and also on their friendship, answering questions from the auditorium. The lecture was a bit lengthy, but nevertheless I liked the central idea. It made me realize how important windows are in Hopper’s paintings!

Several paintings were presented during the lecture which made me look at them more thoroughly than I did when walking through the exhibition. There were also paintings included I hadn’t seen because they are exhibited elsewhere. I had become aware during the exhibition visit that Hopper was interested in “dramatic light” and chose light situations that reminded me of watercolour course’s instructions to part III, tone and composition, dramatic interiors.

I had remembered Hopper’s paintings as nicely made, but too realistic and too severe for my taste. Now studying them a bit more closely, I feel very attracted by the way Hopper painted simple surfaces like walls with vivid undertones within a simple main colour. This has changed the way I look at the buildings when I walk through the streets of New York. I always liked the play of light on stone facades but now I feel more confidence to actually paint this when the occasion comes. I share the pleasure of looking at architectural details that is said to be prominent n Hopper’s paintings and drawings. O’Dohery pointed out in his lecture that Hopper painted these details at a time when no-one else had even noticed they might be interesting. When I look at these paintings, it’s like “oh yeah, I like that, too”. I’m admiring the way he painted the details by painting their shadows.

I’m including some of the paintings presented in the lecture just as a reminder.

hopper_edward-night-windows-oil-on-canvas-1928

Night Windows, 1928, Private Collection

Room in Brooklyn 1932 Museum of Fine Arts, Boston

Room in Brooklyn 1932 Museum of Fine Arts, Boston

morning-in-a-city 1944

Morning in a city, 1944

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Office in a small city, 1953

Edward Hopper 1955 Hotel Window

Hotel Window, 1955

house-at-dusk 1935

House at dusk, 1935

Sources

Wikipaintings Edward Hopper: http://www.wikipaintings.org/en/edward-hopper

Brian O’Doherty: Hopper’s Wiindows. Lecture at the Whitney Museum of American Art, http://whitney.org/Events/HoppersWindows

 

Assignment 2: Still life with watercolour

Preparations

Some preliminary thoughts

I had read the instructions for this assignment earlier, before approaching the two research points of project 4, and felt overwhelmed and a bit puzzled by the question what might be the value of painting another arrangement of uninteresting household items. But doing some research on the genre, even though the time I could afford was very limited, made me more aware of how I might construct the task in a way that would be interesting for me. I’m approaching the task of searching appropriate objects and composing a nice arrangement with new enthusiasm!

The task instructions: Painting a still life

The arrangement

– objects, plants or vegetables
– at least three objects with interesting and contrasting surfaces
– simple objects with personal interest and pleasing colours
– pay attention to colour, texture and shape
– use strong directional light from window or lamp

 Elements of the assignment

– several preliminary drawings to capture variations of shape, colour and shadow
– optional: make notes, eg on colour tones
– make a small colour study to establish the palette. Pre-mix colours using at most three colours for each, make notes on the mixture to help you later. Remember colours can also be made by using layers. Take time to explore the colours of the arrangement
– practice to develop an effective technique if you wish to employ a freer, less naturalistic style

Technique

– paper choice: At least A3 size, 140 lb or heavier
– watercolour can be combined with a drawing medium and any technique encountered in the course so far can be used

Tackling the final painting

– begin with a line drawing (outline sketch)
– start the painting with light colours, work in layers over dry colours to build up tones. Use the colour study as a reminder of the mixtures you need
– use the preliminary drawings to help with shadows and changes in tone
– consider changing brush sizes to wash in a big feature like a shadow or paint fine details
– take time to observe the development of the painting while working on it. Be attentive for the effect of marks on the whole painting when working on a detail.

Working on the assignment

Choosing objects and initial drawings

I decided on a still life with flowers for this assignment. I thought that flowers are not simple objects, but they have nice colours and they would remain interesting as objects even with repeated drawings. I bought red and white flowers and put them in a clay vase. I combined this with a clay pitcher and a small clay mug. I added a greenish plate because I liked the combination with the green stems of the flowers. I added a mango and a grapefruit, too. The mango takes up that green too, and it gives me a second dark red accent to balance the dark red cloves. The research point on colour composition made me aware of this aspect. The grapefruit represented an interesting colour variant to the clay objects.

P1050739The first sketch depicts the arrangement where I had put it on the staircase, with the black timber which protects the walls. I wanted to get a rough indication how my objects would appear in landscape format. But I had to sit on the staircase for this drawing which was very uncomfortable, so I decided to search another place for the arrangement.

 

P1050743I liked how the white flowers appeared before the light yellow walls and decided to keep the idea of placing the arrangement before the wall. I went upstairs and put the objects in roughly the same arrangement right on the floor. I could draw this while sitting on the floor. Not much more comfortable but with breaks it would work.

I made the second sketch in portrait format, which seems to work better. I wanted this to be sort of a greyscale study, to explore light and dark tones of my arrangement. Upstairs the timber at the floor edges is white instead of black, which I liked for the composition. The timber repeats the white of the flowers and these will be the lightest parts of the painting, besides maybe some reflections on the clay objects.

 

P1050741The third sketch, another small one in landscape format. I did this as a first colour study and to see whether the colour composition would work. I chose coloured pencil. I wanted to depict the corresponding colours: white flowers and white timber beam, green stems and greenish plate and the green tone in the mango, and the red flowers with the reddish side of the mango. I think my ideas for the colour composition work well but colour pencil was not the right medium for the task. I found the colours not intense enough. Or maybe I did not employ the pencils in the right way. Also the landscape format felt again a bit like having to squeeze the objects.

Preliminary conclusions are that the portrait format seems to work better. I felt comfortable with how I placed the objects and also liked the colours in my arrangement. I think I can proceed to more detailed studies. I think the final drawing will benefit if I explore the clay forms and their shades. Probably I’ll also need to study the flowers a bit.

For the final painting, I imagine watercolour combined with pen and ink. I think fine dark lines for the floral details and sketchy shape outlines might look nice, combined with a more generous approach for colouring flowers, the fruit and the clay objects.

Studies

P1050745Pastel colour study in A3, in the sketchbook: Exploring the brown tones in the composition. Difficult to depict white flowers with a bold medium – I drew around the space that was reserved for the flowers, but this techneque does not seem to materialize them in the painting.

 

P1050746Pencil greyscale study, sketchbook: I like this one. I tried to capture the relative light and darkness of a smaller section of the arrangement. Maybe for the first time that I succeeded in using a broad range of light and dark tones, with real contrasts, in pencil. The sketch is bold, almost like a painting.

 

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First and second watercolour study: These were meant to try out the colours of the arrangement in watercolour. I felt embarrassed because I found them just miserable. In the first one, the composition does not hold together, the objects much too small. The second is a little bit better for the composition and use of colour, but I’m asking myself what I’ve actually learnt so far in this course.

I don’t know whether my still life arrangement will work for me at this stage. It is much too complex, I think. The white flowers: I don’t know how to paint them. I chose a paper size between A4 and A3 but this looks much too small for the composition. I feel I should paint my objects much larger to have some space for work with colours. Or crop my objects to make them fill more of the sheet, instead of making them small to fit in the small area.

For the colours, I’m not very convinced about the dominance of brown tones in my painting. The actual arrangement looks much fresher and less yellow. The white flowers pop out, the brown tones are more neutral. Ideas for improvement are to use a grey cardboard instead of the wooden floor, this might improve the overall colour impression.

Maybe I should clean up my composition and reduce the number of objects. The arrangement is too complex. Or I should make many separate studies to tackle the complexity in smaller chunks.

More studies

P1050749Sketchbook: Details of the flowers. A closer look at the clove blooms, quick line drawing and greyscale sketch. I discovered that the outer edges are lighter than the inner parts of the bloom. I decided that I would not want to try to exactly depict this because I’d go crazy. But maybe I can use the information in the way I use the brush: When it is filled with fresh colour, then set out to paint the background of another leave (intense colour), then fade to paint the actual blossom leaf.

 

P1050751I moved the arrangement to a different place, from the stairs into my study, onto the drawing desk, because evening was approaching and I needed light. I had been working with soft daylight and knew I had to change something in the lightning to follow instructions of using directional light. It took me a while to set up a new composition where the light would support the composition.

The dark red was difficult because it tended to turn into black when there was not enough light. I moved around my objects until I finally found a composition I liked. I made another greyscale study of the new arrangement in the sketchbook.

Then I decided to do a larger monochrome study in watercolour. I had the idea of masking the white flowers and building up the darker tones around them. I chose Van Dyck brown and a loose sheet somewhat larger than A3 in portrait format. I had also worked on the composition to bring the objects closer together in order to better support the portrait orientation.

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I enjoyed painting and like the result, despite several shortcomings. I think masking the white flowers worked quite well, and I prefer this loose approach to depicting single blooms accurately. I tried to get the tones right but this was only moderately successful. The mango and grapefruit on the plate in the front are not recognizable as objects. All objects are distorted. I did not make an outline sketch because I wanted to develop the objects through application of layers but I think it’s very difficult to get the composition right without the support from an outline drawing.

P1050752I made another greyscale study in the sketchbook and chose charcoal to take a closer look at the fruit on the table. I think that this study is quite successful because it develops three-dimensionality.

I liked working on a larger sheet for the monochrome study. On the other hand, I see the benefit of smaller studies as the charcoal one in the sketchbook, because they oblige to focus on the essential and leave out any detail. I think I’ll also do a study for the technique I’d like to employ, pen and ink with watercolour.

Compositional sketch and colour study

I wanted to improve the deptiction of shapes and made another compositional sketch, but larger this time (A3 format). I tried to pay attention to negative space. Then I made a small colour study with the intended technique for the final painting. I think this study shows significant improvements over the first two colour studys, in colour as well as in composition. I was glad because I felt that the earlier studies I made for this assignment began to pay off.

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Final painting

P1050754For the final painting I had to slightly change the arrangement because the flowers didn’t look good anymore. I couldn’t find dark red cloves again, so I bought a different kind of dark red flowers. The white ones were replaced with the same kind of flower.

I only made one preparatory pencil study of the buds of the new red flowers. I think I captured the character of the buds in my lines but I wasn’t able to depict them naturalistically. I was a bit frustrated but on the other hand thought that a more generous painting style without accurate detail would suit me better and I hoped that the small study had improved my understanding of the flower. Then I proceeded to the final painting.

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What I like best in the painting are the white flowers, they look very energetic. I think I chose a suitable technique by employing masking rubber and laying the background wash on top. I also think that the painting benefitted from all the studies I made for preparation. For example, the colour studies improved each time and the final painting can be recognized as the latest in a series. The pencil sketches helped to improve composition and depiction of objects, in that there’s much less distortion compared to initial attempts. The greyscale studies with pencil and charcoal helped to improve the tonality in the painting.

I think the painting has a major weakness in the greenery around the red flowers to the left. I think I was not concentrated enough when I painted that area and the colour layers I added destroyed what I had painted in earlier layers. But I decided to stop at one point because I did not believe I could improve without overworking that area.

I also decided to not employ lines as initially planned. I liked the lines in the little colour study but feared they’d be too bold for the painting. I would like to continue exploring the subject. For example try different variations like with and without lines, or practising to improve on colour intensity and painting the greenery. But in light of the time restrictions for the course it’s probably wiser to move on.

Research point: Still life

The Still Life genre exists since Roman times and has evolved over time. I selected five paintings from different artists after 1600 to look at developments since the 17th century.

Roelant Savery 1624 Still lifeRoelant Savery’s 1624 Still life seems to exemplify the love of detail of medieval paintings. He depicted 44 different species of animals and 63 species of flowers in a single painting.  There may have been symbolic meanings in his choice of species, but these are not immediately accessible to a 21st century viewer of the painting. Contrasting to still lives from earlier times, there are no direct allusions to religious topics, reflecting the turn of the times to science and humanism.

Anne Vallayer-Coster c1770 Still life with a round bottleAnne Vallayer-Coster, c. 1770, Still life with a round bottle represents a more modern style, still naturalistic but less overburdened with details compared to Savery. Vallayer-Coster was a French painter whose style was very successful in 18th century France. Hers is like an archetypical still life: A selection of ordinary objects, nicely arranged and depicted naturalistically.

Henri Matisse 1910 Still life with GeraniumsHenri Matisse’s 1910 Still life with geraniums shows influences of modern abstraction through the somewhat distorted perspective, beyond directly naturalistic depiction.

Georges Braque 1910 Violin and CandlestickGeorges Braque’s 1910 Violin and Candlestick illustrates the influence of Cubism into the still life genre.

Giorgio Morandi 1956 Natura MortaFinally Giorgio Morandi’s 1956 Natura morta (oil on canvas) painting is entirely focused on tonal values, leaving out problems of colour. The composition serves the particular aim of studying light on objects. The still life as such has no meaning. Where cubism abstracted from object forms and classical composition, Morandi abstracted from colour and any meaning the particular objects might have for those who live with them and use them. This is a stark contrast to still life paintings of earlier ages which were often full of symbolism.

Background/foreground: Savery’s background is a stylized window sill. Similarly, Vallayer-Coster has a neutral but realistic background – just the table and the shades of light on a wall, no objects. Matisse places the actual arrangement in a rich context – a table with a tablecloth, a wooden background, floor planks, pictures in the background. Braque’s cubist still life has no clearly defined foreground/background composition. Morandi’s background is flat and abstract.

Space between objects: Savery’s, Vallaer-Coster’s and Matisse’s spacing between objects seems natural, with Savery’s arrangement a bit stuffed, but filling the entire picture plane. In Braque’s cubist still life the spaces are again beyond traditional understanding of object placement because object boundaries are not clearly defined. Morandi’s composition is a bit strange in that the objects are very close together in the center of the painting, with lots of empty space around them. This space is filled with shadows on the right side, otherwise the relatively large plain area shows subtle tonal variations created through the painting technique.

Sources
– Wikipedia Article: Still life, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Still_life

Research point: Some different approaches to colour theory and painting

I chose two painters of who lived at approximately the same time and looked at how they used colour in different ways: Paul Klee and Piet Mondrian.

Paul Klee

Paul Klee (1979-1940) was a Painter of Swiss-German origin. Originally he was drawing and painting naturalistically but later turned to a more astract approach after a visit to Tunisia. His use of colour is very subtle with soft shadings. He reportedly excelled at drawing and graphic works from an early age on but had great difficulties with colour. Later he became a highly influential colour theorist. The visit to Tunisia in 1914 may have represented a major turning point because it inspired him to explore colour and find a personal approach, which was strongly connected to his musicality.

I chose two paintings which I found particularly interesting, “Black Columns in a Landscape” (1919) and “Tale à la Hoffman” (1921). Both paintings are rather small, around 20×30 cm. They are both watercolours mixed with pen and ink.

Paul Klee 1919 Black Columns in a Landscape

Paul Klee 1921 Tale à la Hoffmann

Klee’s use of colour was not naturalistic. This may have to do with his choice of mostly astract subjects. He seemed to use colour to convey mood and a particular atmosphere. He rarely used intense tones, but obtained relative colour intensity through the contrast to surrounding the more intense tones with paler shades of the same or contrasting colours.

The “Black columns in a landscape” employs more contrasting tones and almost no naturalistic elements, compared to the “Tales à la Hoffmann” with its dominant yellow shades around some small child-like line sketches human figures, stairs, an umbrella etc.
The eye seems to glide gently over the areas of similar tones, then is suddenly blocked by an area in a contrasting colour. The compositions create multiple pathways to wander around in the paintings. Thus for me the paintings are mystically interesting to look at again and again, because they cannot be understood in the same way as a naturalistic painting.

Piet Mondrian

Piet Mondrian 1935 Composition C (No. III) with Red, Yellow and BluePiet Mondrian (1872 – 1944) was a Dutch painter who lived between the Netherlands and Paris, later in London and New York. Mondrian is mostly known for his graphic-style works after 1920, large-scale paintings of coloured squares and rectangles, enclosed by black lines and filled in few basic colours red, blue and yellow.

I chose Piet Mondrian because I remembered his very graphical, bold use of colour, for example “Composition C (No. III) with Red, Yellow and Blue”. I saw this as an extreme contrast in use of colour, compared to paintings of Paul Klee.

Piet Mondrian 1913 Tableau No. 2 - composition No. VIIThrough my research, I realized how both painters were both influenced by cubism. As an example, I include “Tableau No. 2/Composition No. VII, 1913”, Oil on Canvas, which is a line based painting on a background of subtle colour tones and shades. The painting surprised me because I had not expected to see such subtle colouring from what I had previously known about Mondrian.

I was even more surprised when I searched still further back in time and found beautiful naturalistic landscape paintings. In extreme contrast to his later work, colour is here used naturalistically, including intense colours, colour contrasts and related colours. I chose the painting “Small farm on Nistelrode” (1904) to illustrate early works by Mondrian.

Piet Mondrian 1904 Small-farm-on-nistelrode

 

 

Sources: Paul Klee

Paintings

  • Black Columns in a Landscape, 1919; Watercolor, pen, and ink on paper , 8 x 10 3/8 in. (20.4 x 26.3 cm), The Berggruen Klee Collection, 1987 (1987.455.1) © 2011 Artists Rights Society (ARS), New York / VG Bild-Kunst, Bonn
  • Tale à la Hoffmann, 1921; Watercolor, pencil, and transferred printing ink on paper, bordered with metallic foil, 12 1/4 x 9 1/2 in. (31.1 x 24.1 cm), The Berggruen Klee Collection, 1984 (1984.315.26) © 2011 Artists Rights Society (ARS), New York / VG Bild-Kunst, Bonn

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Sources: Piet Mondrian

Paintings

  • Small farm on Nistelrode, 1904, gouache and watercolor on paper, private collection
  • Tableau No. 2 composition No. VII, 1913, oil on canvas, 105 x 114 cm, Solomon R. Guggenheim Museum, New York
  • Composition C (No. III) with Red, Yellow and Blue, 1935, oil on canvas, 56 x 52.2 cm, private collection

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Colour

This project was about learning to use colour with watercolours. I began this project in January and made a long break from February until the end of August 2013.

Exercise: Still life with colourful objects

January 2013

The task:
collect some colourful objects around the house for a still life
try to include colour contrast as well as different intensities within a single colour
arrange the objects into an interesting composition

I had quite a few difficulties finding appropriate objects because I seem to own only white, black or dull coloured objects. Even a look into the refridgerator didn’t solve the problem. I decided to go into a supermarket and buy some fruit or vegetables. The security guard might have found my behaviour before the fruit stand quite interesting… but finally I was able to decide on a selection of fruit: a yellow melon, two pale yellow Nashi pears, some dark red plums and some lichis. Back home I tried several different arrangements with fruit and differently coloured pottery and napkins, and finally chose a combination with a yellow-orange pomegranate, a blue pitcher and blue and yellow napkins.

First step: compositional sketch and quick colour study

P1050700The compositional sketch in the sketchbook worked fine for me, only that I found the objects occupied not enough space and thus made a smaller frame around them to remind me of increasing their size for the later drawing. I made a quick colour study on the same page in the sketchbook, but used watersoluble wax crayons which I reworked with a wash. Again I was satisfied with my composition and colour effects.

The colours worked out as I had expected: There are the colour contrasts of blue pitcher and napkin versus orange pomegranate and the red-violet tones of the table and the plums. The second contrast is between the yellow tones and the violet component of the table and plum colours. The colour shadings are different tones of yellow from very pale (the background wall) to quite intense (the melon), plus the different tones of red-violet of the table and the plums.

I wasn’t very happy with the instructions to make this colour study into the sketchbook because my sketchbook is fine for drawing but the paper is not heavy enough for working with water. I’d have preferred to do the study on watercolour paper and I think I will begin a second sketchbook which will be reserved for watercolour quick studies. Alternatively, I might use loose sheets of appropriate paper and later bind them together into a sketchbook. I realized that this is an aspect of my work processes with which I am not very satisfied. I wouldn’t want to do pencil sketches in a watercolour paper sketchbook and this has the consequence that I will have to maintain separate sketchbooks for each type of task. This will make it difficult to follow the development process of a painting from initial sketches over various studies to the final drawing. So probably for me it would be the best to abandon the sketchbook approach entirely and use loose sheets instead, label them properly including the date, and later bind them in the right ordering. But I’m not very sure about this. I’d prefer to follow instructions because I trust they do make sense, but they don’t seem to fit with my preferences.

The other problem was that watersoluble wax crayons are fine in the sketchbook when used dry, but the paper almost dissolved when I washed over them. The study does give a general impression of the colours, but if I want to solve colour-related problems like developing the right mix and intensity of base colours, or working out the colour of shadows, they permit only a rough indication and I think I prefer to use watercolours right from the beginning.

But otherwise, I like my arrangement and the colours and think I will stick to it for the larger drawing.

Another colour study

P1050712I intended to proceed to the final drawing and made an outline sketch on A3 paper, but then decided to do another colour study – this time with the watercolour selection I intended to use. The idea was to try out the colour mixes. I wanted to use the artist quality watercolours in tubes, of which I only have 5 different colours. I remembered that mixing my red and blue did not give me a nice violet, but some sort of muddy brown. But when I used Payne’s grey instead of blue, the tone was much closer to the darkish red-violet that I wanted to have for my table.

I began with a very simple outline sketch and very pale colours, then gradually increased colour intensity. Towards the end, I painted some shadows with pale Payne’s grey, and some dark spot with the same colour in greater intensity. I encountered quite a few problems.

One of them is how to mix colours without spoiling the base colours. Currently I begin with one pure colour, then take a brush full into a different area of the palette, then take a second brush for the second colour and add a brush full into the first colour. If the mix is not ok, I’m in trouble because I can’t go back into the original colour if the brush is with the mix or the other colour. This is a real practical problem for me and I’m quite surprised that the course materials only instruct „keep your palette as clean as possible“ but don’t explain how that could possibly be done. Hopefully with some practice I’ll develop a way. I might also ask my tutor once I officially resume coursework.

Another problem was with my choice of brush in relationship to the size of the area I wanted to fill. I used the intense purple for the plums and a paler wash for the table. The brush size was fine for the (small) plums, but it resulted in an uneven colour layer for the larger area of the table. Not sure whether this would have worked better if I had taken more colour on the brush. But I think I will have to work on this to obtain a smoother colour distribution on larger areas.

I’m not sure whether I will manage the colour mixing for the final painting. I decided to make a pause and will tackle the larger sheet later. Maybe I should use the Schmincke colour set which includes more colours. This would help to get the colours right because I only need to fine-tune the tone, rather than mixing the base tones. It may be that I wasn’t lucky with my base tone selection for the colours in tubes, they don’t seem to give me nice mix tones.

February 2013

I had to take a break from coursework because my cat Paula, who was very ill, has passed away. I was so sad, I am still sad but gradually life is getting back to normal. She has been my first cat and my companion for almost 8 years. It is very strange that she no longer sleeps by my side, and I miss her.

During the week, I had left the arrangement where it was, on the kitchen table, and just organized my cooking differently by using another table. The other cats had jumped on the table and the original arrangement was no longer available. So I left unused the pencil sketch which I had already made of the first arrangement, and started with a new sketch.

The experiences from the second colour study were helpful because I knew approximately how to mix the colours. I proceeded as described in the instructions, beginning with pale colours, then painting the intermediate tones, and adding dark colours only towards the end. I’m not very satisfied with the results because the colours are less bright than I intended. My selection has only primary colours, so I had to mix the violet tones. The tone is about right but the overall effect is that of a broken tone.

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I stopped painting when the colours had about the intensity I wanted to have, and because I did not know how to improve the painting without really overworking it, despite not being satisfied with the result. I thought about repeating the study with a different selection of watercolours – the Schmincke set – because it contains more different colours and I could choose from brighter pigments. Maybe then the tones would be less muddy and broken.

Guided reflections

Which colours work best and why?
The pale yellow background works very well, I think this is because it is very evenly painted and thus is very neutral and undisturbing, just what I intended. I also like the dark violet tone of the plums, because it is very intense and the irregularity of brush marks appear quite natural to me.
The orange tone in the pomegranate works well because it is bright and warm. The darker spots to its side work less well. The intense yellow tone of the melon and the napkin are also quite successful. That of the melon works well against the very pale background yellow, that of the napkin intensifies the contrast to the purple plums.

Which areas work well, why are they successful?
Well I think there are no particularly successful areas. What works quite well is how I captured the direction of the light, with the brightest and clearest tones on the tops of the fruit.

How could you have improved the colours that don’t seem to work very well?
The darker areas of the melon don’t work very well, I think the colour I chose is too far away from the bright yellow areas. I should have used a more subtle tonal value, more of an ochre tone. The same problem appears for the pomegranate.

The cast shadows of the fruit on the napkin don’t work very well neither. I should have taken less dark tones with a higher colour saturation, I think. For example, the cast shadow of the right Nashi pear is greenish, but I think the actual shadow of the arrangement was much brighter and more of a yellow tone.

The blue tones were also very difficult. The real blue had more of a violet tone in it, but I wasn’t able to mix it from the colours I had: Mixing a tad of red into the blue tone immediately caused the colour to become muddy. Maybe I should have used a different colour selection right from the start, with a blue tone closer to the one I needed for the arrangement.

What were the reasons for the colours looking ‚wrong‘? (muddy or poorly painted, wrong relationship to other colours?)
The blue of the vase and the napkin look wrong because they are not the tone of the actual objects. The darker areas of the melon looks wrong because it was poorly painted, too dark compared to the actual object colour. The cast shadows look wrong for the same reason.

Second attempt

I decided it would be worthwile to paint another version of the still life. I used the first pencil sketch, which I had retained, and slightly rearranged the fruit to fit with the drawing. I used the Schmincke watercolour set and applied the same technique as before, working from pale tones over mid tones to dark colours. Strangely enough, the colours are almost identical to the first painting – although one of the reasons for repeating the study was that I suspected the colours to be too difficult to mix. So I must conclude that I did what I wanted in the first painting, in the same way as in the second… seems to be my sense of colour which is responsible for the result, and not some technical properties of the pigments…

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The colours are somewhat more evenly applied in the second painting, I think the dark areas of the fruit are less disturbing and work better because the colours I used were less dark. I’m still rather unsatisfied with the result. I think the colours I painted are relatively close to what I saw, but I just don’t like the overall impression. But I will take a break from the task at this point and proceed to the next exercise. I think painting in colour needs much more practice, and maybe I’ll get along better with a different subject and different colours.

Exercise: Working with greys and browns

February 2013

P1050701I selected a seastar, a piece of driftwood and two oysters as pale-coloured objects for this exercise, and added a bright pink small seastar for the contrasting object. I arranged the items on a white cotton cloth, using a grey sketching paper sheet attached to the wall for the background. I found a nice arrangement and made a first compositional sketch in my sketchbook. Before beginning to draw, I realized that a portrait format might work best, but started on the upper half of the A4 sketchbook page as if I would be drawing a small A5 landscape format. Then the drawing developed differently and extended into the lower half of the page, resulting in an almost square format.

I thought it might be a good idea to re-arrange the objects slightly to emphasize the portrait format, but then I was interrupted by my cat Gina who placed herself amidst the arrangement. So I made a pause. I’ll see what I can do later on. Maybe the square format is not bad, for a change from the two standard orientations. But I was impressed that I had correctly observed right from the start that the drawing would tend to extend towards the observer, rather than to the left and right sides.

The sketch and colour study of the previous study are on the back side of this sketchbook page, which spoils the drawing. Another reminder to change approach in future times and not use watercolour in this book.

Resuming work: August 2013

I can’t believe half a year has passed since I last worked on the watercolour course. In March I finished the psychology master’s and switched to working full-time again. In April I was mostly on business travel. In May I went to New York to find an apartment. In June was the move – with all my stuff being packed in a large container, to travel across the ocean. In July it all arrived and I was drowned in cartons. It took me another 4 weeks to unpack everything, which I did mostly in the evenings, after work. And now finally I’ve got a little room set up for my study, and am glad that I can resume coursework now.

I took up lots of inspiration from the new environment and maybe the pause was beneficial in a way, because I took some distance to my study habits and approach. Main points that I’d like to work on are:

  • write less, but in-depth – keep it to the essential
  • try to work regularly, develop the habit of devoting time to artwork
  • make more drawings and experiment
  • make notes of inspirations from outside

I looked through what I’ve done so far in this part of the course and I think I’ll just dive in to continue the project, without repetition of earlier exercises. With the exemption of the first compositional drawing for this exercise – I will make a different arrangement of items, and begin with a small compositional sketch.

Small compositional sketch

P1050704A first approach to my arrangement. I returned to the large pale brown starfish and the little pink one, but combined it differently with a rectangle wooden basket, a wooden box and a clay pot. No greys, but a combination of pale browns, on a white table surface with a light yellow wall background. I chose A4 landscape format and got a little lost in the details of the basket, then reminding me that this sketch was about composition, and speeding up a little. Actually I liked the arrangement, therefore did not change anything and did a second larger drawing.

Second larger drawing

I was asked myself why it would make sense to draw the same thing again, just larger, as stated in the instructions. Maybe there is a scale effect to master with different sheet sizes. I found the larger size more comfortable. I avoided getting into details but tried to get shapes and proportions right, and also lightly worked out the tones.

Main difficulty was to estimate the proportions correctly. I’m also anticipating some difficulties with the wooden basket for the later painting because the woven structure is difficult to depict.

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Colour study

This task reminded me of a problem I constantly had so far in the course. It has to do with using the sketchbook for drawings and colour studies. My sketchbook has medium weight paper, maybe 140 gms. It is not appropriate for watercolour because the paper buckles when wet, and the drawing on the backside gets spoiled.

Following task instructions by the word is not really satisfying. I might better use two separate books for drawings and watercolour studies, plus using extra sheets for some paintings. Or as outlined earlier, use loose sheets only. But I’m still undecided. Maybe a sketchbook with heavier paper would suit both tasks, and I could still use extra sheets for some paintings. I finally decided to use a loose sheet of paper for this colour study and not spoil the sketchbook drawings.

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Background: Wanted to lay a wash for the background, from pale grey to clear white – to resemble the actual light situation on the table. Wasn’t successful. Reworked the sheet a few times, then the paper began to drizzle. Solution might be to take a larger brush for the wash and try to get it right in a single go.

Colours of the arrangement: The grey background wash was too strong and dulled the soft colours, this should be more subtle in the later painting. I began with an ocre tone and found this was a nice base tone to develop the other brown tones from. The details of the wooden basket indeed pose problems. It might work better to paint it more generously. The pink colour of the small starfish tends to fall out of the picture, but I seem to have prevented this from happening. It might be thanks to the background wash.

Painting with greys and browns: Starfish composition

I finished the final painting in a state of great frustration… A tendency to only see what doesn’t work, trying to improve and stopping when I think I completely spoiled it. Now an hour later, I see things less negative.

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Overall, I think the painting is too pale. I did not succeed in getting intense tones. On the other hand, it improved over the colour study because the colours are less muddy. As anticipated, I did not master the wooden basket. It is a complicated object, maybe I should have done a separate detailed study of it to be more at ease with it. The intersection with the wooden box is not well defined, another element that might have benefitted from a detailed study.

What works rather nicely are the different colour tints in the pale tones. Only the shades are too bold and look like not belonging to the objects. The overall colouring has improved over the study. I think this was because this time I used a pale yellow, even wash as a background. This did not dull down the tones of later layers as the grey wash in the study had done.

There was a problem with lightning though. My studies were made yesterday evening with lamp light, while the painting was done under daylight shining into the room from the outside. This completely changed the shadows in the arrangement. There was a pattern of shadows on the table, but it disappeared during the two hours where I was working as the sun was rising. I ended up with almost no shadow pattern on the table, but the shadows in my arrangement were darker. I wasn’t able to depict that correctly.

I think I’m quite confused about two aspects of a painting: Firstly there is the colour of an object with a certain the intensity. And secondly, there’s the degree of light or darkness of tones. While I painted, I had problems deciding whether I needed more intensity in colour or a darker tone. I’m not even sure whether I spotted the root of my difficulties correctly. Maybe it gets better with practice. But somehow I feel that something isn’t working with my approach.

I also noticed that I tended to put in defining details too early, where instructions read to do this only at the final stage. But I was working on the mid-tones and wanted to paint only selected areas in a different colour and this resulted in defining details. Probably another aspect which hopefully gets easier with practice.

Comparative evaluation of approaches: colourful vs greys & browns

I wasn’t very comfortable with either approach. I don’t particularly like my colourful objects painting because the colours went muddy during my attempts to get the tones right. What surprised me even more was that the second attempt with a different set of watercolours produced an almost identical outcome.

Compared to the colourful arrangement, I prefer the greys & browns picture. After all the colours are pale, but less muddy. There’s some friendliness in the starfish painting which I miss in the colourful fruit composition. It might make a difference whether I work with daylight or lamp light. It seems to me as if my daylight paintings are nicer.

I’m not able to say one or the other approach worked better for me. I had severe difficulties with both, beginning with the artificiality of selecting and arranging some objects, rather than just depicting what is there and selecting a good viewpoint for it.

How to continue?

It may have to do with the long pause, but at the moment I feel quite discouraged about my ability to paint with watercolours. It might be a good idea to go through all the coursework I’ve done and read my logbook, to refresh memory about techniques and what I had learned already.

I also realize that I don’t seem able to “write less”… I can do the reflections right after doing a study or painting, when memory is fresh, and then obtaining a quite accurate protocol of my struggles. If I wait until the end of an exercise until I write the log, I’ll probably forget about the hassles and would reflect only on the visual results, more like an outsider. Then the writing would be much shorter. I don’t know what’s better. Maybe the second approach is more feasible in light of making the best use of my time. I might give it a try with the next exercise.

Exercise: Warm and cold colours

The task was to make 6 postcard size watercolours, three of observed and three of imagined/memorized objects. The colour choice for object and background should comprise a contrast between warm and cold colours.

My work for this exercise

I chose simple household objects for the observed items. The first, a wooden cigarette box on a napkin, was supposed to have the contrast between a warm brown (the box) and a cold brown (napkin). The second a green bell pepper on a blue napkin with folds. The third a blue bowl on a yellow tablet.

For the imagined items, I painted images from childhood memories. The first was my mother’s yellow sports car when she once came to pick me up from primary school, the second was the hill behind our house with blackberry bushes to its sides, and the third the small castle in the vicinity, embedded in yellow corn and wheat fields.

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Some personal reflections on process and result

I had lots of trouble with this exercise. With the first part, I found it really difficult to decide on “simple” objects to paint, because my household is very functional and I tend to buy things in black, white, grey or metal colours. So the choice of colourful objects is quite limited and it took me a while to find something at least moderately appropriate for the exercise. Then while painting, I struggled with depiction. Each painting took rather half an hour than the suggested five minutes. Initially I was very dissatisfied with the results, but with a little distance timewise, I begin to like them better.

Then with the imaginary objects it took much effort to go through my childhood memories and select something I’d like to paint. It may have to do with mature age – childhood is about 40 years ago, and memories of the first time I went to the seaside (as suggested in the course materials) are not accessible to me anymore. I sat quietly on a sofa for around 2 hours sifting through memory before I was able to select my topics. I was tempted to resort to painting “imagined” rather than “memorized” objects because I have no difficulty just inventing things and forms, relying on memories of similar objects. But after all, I found it worthwhile that I gave it a try.

What I particularly like about the three imagined paintings is their boldness in approach. The observed objects are simple, but while painting I got lost in details like different tones, surface structure and light reflections. With the imagined objects, none of this happened and it was maybe for the first time that I grew a bit more confident with applying intense colours in bold strokes. I think there’s also a progression from the first to the third imagined painting, with the third one being the most simple and at ease.

So overall, I found this a very rewarding exercise for me personally.

Guided reflections on this exercise

As outlined above, I think the paintings from imaginations were the more successful ones, because I stopped worrying about details of which inhibit me while painting. I hope I can learn to transfer this boldness to paintings from observations.

Putting the six paintings side by side now doesn’t particularly change my seeing of them, but I remember that I realized the progression in the three imagined paintings when I put those three together right after the work session.

Reflecting on all the work for project 4

My favourite paintings for this project were the small colour study in the sketchbook for the colourful objects painting, the grey and brown tones final painting (starfish), and the last imagined painting (castle with corn fields).

The colour study was made boldly and fast, with clean and bright, unmudded colours. This worked much better than the actual paintings where my efforts of getting tones and details right resulted in dulling the colours.

The starfish painting is nice because of the subtlety in brown shades. Even if the overall range of tones is a bit limited, I find that the painting is successful because the dark tones don’t stand out linke strange elements, neither does the single small colourful object (the small pink starfish).

In the imagined painting of the castle surrounded by cornfield the contrast between the warm yellow-orange of the fields against the dark grey roadway and the cold brown tone of the castle conveys much energy. I think this is supported through the colour contrast with the bold blue sky.

I’m not sure whether the small preparatory studies really helped with the larger paintings. I rather felt they were getting me nowhere because I did not really tackle the difficulties of the actual composition. After the exercise with the imagined small studies, I think for me it might work better to do small studies from short-term memory rather than from direct observation – it might help me to focus on the essential, rather than getting lost in details with no space to actually explore them.

I also think they don’t help with the composition because of the scale effect from small sketch to larger painting. I felt that a small picture looked well filled, while the same composition at a larger scale revealed empty spaces without much interest. This happened with both the colourful objects and in the grey & brown tones painting. On the other hand, the larger compositional sketch for the grey & brown tones painting shows the same undefined empty space to the lower right as the later painting. Not sure what would be a better way to approach that problem.

Due to lack of experience, I’m not sure what works best for me as preparation for larger pictures. Smaller studies in pencil might help to explore and understand complex areas in the composition, which might help when it comes to simplyfing them in the later painting. Small colour studies don’t seem particularly helpful to me. They are nice on their own, but the colour impression on a small scale is different from that on a larger sheet. So a colour study might be more helpful if done in the actual intended scale.

Tone and composition

This project focused on tonal studies – learning to use the entire span from very light to very dark tones. There was also a shift from small and simple still life arrangements to the more complex topic of interior views.

Exercise: Composition of an interior

The task was to paint an interior view with a single dark colour. The composition was to entail a large area of mid tones, plus elements in very light tones and very dark tones.

P1050268I decided on a view towards the window, in the room that opens to the balcony. I began with a pencil drawing right on the watercolour paper. Instead of a quick sketch, I got carried away and made a detailed drawing, which took me two or three hours to complete… I had doubts whether I’d be able to build a generous watercolour painting on this groundwork, but I’m quite satisfied with the later results. There are too many details but the painting is less overworked than previous still life studies, despite using layers.

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Composition of an interior, 34x48cm

My main difficulty was that the light situation constantly changed over the day. It had been cloudy while I was drawing. I began painting at around half past 2 in the afternoon and since it is winter I knew that I had at most two hours left if I wanted to use daylight. The beginnings were quite ok but when I came to the darker tones, it had become so dark in the room that the contrasts were entirely different from those when I started. So I painted some darker areas out of memory and then left the painting as it was.

Problematic areas are the heap of things on top of the bookcase to the right – I couldn’t remember how this looked like and improvised but not very successfully. There are some errors in the shapes of the cat scratch tree in the middle area but I realized this only when I already had painted the main shapes so couldn’t correct anymore.

The windows were quite complicated and I would have liked to have more time to analyse the gradation of tones, but I became stressed by the vanishing daylight so they are a bit hastily made. I quite like how I painted the plant to the left, and also the sofa with its cushions and the light areas on its top. I also like how I captured the afternoon sunlight that shone into the room. I think this is achieved through the very light tones for the sitting areas in the cat tree and for the sofa, plus the light and shadow on the floor. I also like that my cat Micky is depicted. It was a nice occasion because he took a nap on the sofa while I was drawing the outline sketch. Later he went away so the colouring is from memory.

With this study, I used a separate paper sheet to try out the brush load before painting, I found this quite helpful, although I made less use of it than I thought I would. Before beginning to paint, I made a photograph of the view because I anticipated that the painting would take me longer than just the two hours I had with daylight. It might be an option for future paintings to continue from the photograph as an aide-memoire for tonal values. But I did not use the photo here and I think this results in a slightly inconsistent tonal distribution because shadows became more and more intense as the afternoon passed.

Guided reflections

How did you respond to the challenge of scaling up from still life to an interior?

Actually I had made this transition already in the exercise on drawing and painting because I chose an interior view as my first subject. I do remember how difficult I found this, because the elements of the composition are much larger and need to be scaled down to fit the paper area. The effect of space is also quite different – it is not about centimeters between relatively small objects, but the area can span easily several meters. I anticipate the difference implied in depicting landscapes!

How did you cope with selecting important features? Did you have difficulty filtering out detail?

I did a very detailed drawing to prepare the painting, but focused entirely on line, not on tonal areas. I tried to maintain the same level of detail over the entire view. But even with the many details I included, there was a significant degree of selection. Overall I’m quite satisfied with the level of detail included in the painting, the problem was more that the areas were incorrectly worked out due to my stress with vanishing daylight.

Has your ability to ‚read‘ and interpret tonal values improved with practice?

Yes I think so. Especially the restriction to a single colour permits to focus on tonal values and I found this quite helpful.

Has this exercise developed your sense of the importance of tone in composition?

I wasn’t aware of it but nevertheless I’d answer with yes, because I was surprised by the effect of incoming sunlight I achieved through the light areas. I also realize that the very dark areas are important to give depth to the composition

Exercise: Dramatic Interiors

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Dramatic interior 1 (from light into dark),
40 x 30cm

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Dramatic interior 2 (from dark into light),
40 x 30cm

 

Dramatic interior 1: From light into dark (left)

The task was to paint a monochrome interior view from one room into another, where the two connected rooms should have contrasting lighting. I chose the view from the kitchen into the hall. The kitchen was light, while I dimmed the lighting in the hall.

P1050288I chose an A3 sheet, smaller than for the previous interior because I intended to use a portrait format and felt that the larger sheet would appear too empty, as there was much less detail to include. I made an initial sketch focusing on line which I found successful. I noticed that I went into a slight three-point perspective, with the right outer contour of the kitchen door at an outward angle. First I thought I needed to correct this but then decided to keep it in the drawing to see how the impression would be in the final painting.

I chose prussian blue for this painting and began with a light wash over the entire sheet, then continued with a minimally darker wash to leave out the brightest areas which I had identified as the side front of the cabinet to the left, the lower left half of the doorframe, and the inner borders of the glass window in the kitchen door. I then gradually worked towards darker colours.

I tried to define the midtone which I found to be the lightest tone in the darker area. In the hall as the darker area I changed from the medium to a darker wash and tried to work out the shapes in increasingly darker tones. I found this quite difficult and think I overworked the wooden drawer cabinet in the hall. Its tonal value was so dark that I could hardly see any details and wasn’t able to isolate those elements which would have sufficed to give a rough indication of the object. Maybe I’ll have a look again tomorrow with a fresh eye. Maybe I should have painted it like the armchair, just dark shape without details.

Another less successful area is the gas heating box in the upper left, I think this element lacks contrast. Nevertheless, overall I am quite satisfied with the painting. I think it is a nice composition and I like the effect of light shining from the kichen into the hall. Micky had been sitting on the drawer cabinet while I was sketching, and I included him, but he later went away and I was left with insufficient memory about the tonal values of his shape. It would have been good to have a tonal pencil study or a photograph to aid with this problem, or maybe I should have left out the cat.

Dramatic interior 2: From dark into light (right)

I painted the second dramatic interior with switched lighting: The same view as the first, but this time the kitchen was dim while the hall was light. I made minor changes in perspective though, and I had the intention of reducing the amount of detail and using less layers than before.

With the results, I was quite satisfied. Contrasts could be stronger, but the light distribution is clearly different from the first image and one can see which room was darker. A bit problematic again was the drawer cabinet, I had difficulties to not overwork. And the cat scratching tree to its right isn’t painted well enough to be recognized. Problematic also the long dark bands representing the shadows between door and door frame, or between the white cabinet and the drawer.

Becoming better would mean to me getting the tones right with fewer layers and with a more generous approach, i.e. more water on the brush and covering larger areas at once. And maybe not bothering to paint linear details in watercolour, but use drawing instead. I think this painting would benefit if I’d draw in some lines! But I won’t because it’s not in the instructions. Maybe when I find the time to do some free, experimental work.

Third dramatic interior: From light to dark again

For this study, I chose a colour from a different set of watercolours, which I own for very long – Schmicke Artist Watercolours in pans. I bought them in my twenties because I wanted to learn watercolour painting, but actually used them only once or twice and abandoned the plan because I found the medium too complicated to handle. I really liked that I can now finally put them to use!

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Third dramatic interior (from light to dark),
32 x 24 cm

I first made a colour sheet to try out these new colours. In their pans, the colours look so similar that I wouldn’t be able to distinguish between them. The colour sheet is thus really helpful as a future reference, at least if I don’t change the order of pans in the box… From these colours, I chose a dark green. The view was from the brightly lit living room into the dim backwards corridor. The composition includes the door plus the immediate surroundings, but this time I let the door half open which created interesting perspective lines.

I chose a smaller paper sheet to help me getting away from painting too many details. I wanted to focus on the main shapes and I think this was successful (more than in the earlier studies). For example, the doors have quite an intricate pattern of light and shade but I painted only the main highlights rather than all the tiny differently shaded shapes. I also needed less layers for the effect I wanted. Less successful is the wooden floor, the darker basket is overworked, and sometimes I forgot to wait until one layer was fully dry before painting the next which resulted in bleeding. Probably it would have been possible to work out stronger tonal contrasts, but I did not want to rework it because I liked the lightness and unfinished character of the painting. I think I’m going towards the right direction, but need more practice.

Fourth dramatic interior: From dark to light again

Again I intended to focus on reducing detail, increasing contrast and using less layers. I had difficulties finding another view which did not simply repeat what I had already done. I decided to cut the composition again, as in the first two, to not include the entire height of the doorframe, but this time I wanted to include the upper half. I sat on a highchair which helped getting the viewpoint right. I chose Payne’s gray from the Schmincke set, and from all four studies I like this interior best for the colour. The neutral tonal value works well with the focus of the task which is a tonal study, whereas I find that the other colours have something artificial to them if used on their own.

P1050314I painted from a dim hall into the well lit living room. I like the effect but there is a particular problem to this setting: The light was not enough for painting. With a dark colour, I tend to paint very subtle tonal differences, but once I look at the painting in lighter lamp light, many elements become indistinguishable because the contrasts were too weak.

This time I decided to rework some problematic areas, for example the white chair before the white wall. It was slightly lighter than the wall and so I toned down the wall to increase the contrast. I also toned down the doorframe and wall in the darker room. This improved the overall impression of the painting. From all four, I like this one best – I think this is because it is the one with the least detail and best contrasts.

Exercise: Imaginary rooms

A hall by day and night

For this task, I imagined a room with a large window, a cabinet, a round table and a lamp. The first study was a daylight scene, the second the same view at night. I chose a dark brown tone and a small sheet of paper in landscape orientation.

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I found the task quite difficult, not so much because of the invention of room and furniture, but because of the effect of the light sources. I think it is easier to observe actual light effects than trying to develop them out of the rules of angles in perspective. But the exercise points to the necessity and usefulness of observational painting to achieve realistic depictions. Even from observation, tonal values are difficult to depict correctly.

Inside a wooden hut

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Third imagined interior: Inside a wooden hut, 32 x 24 cm

For another imagined interior, I had the initial idea of a garden house with a view into greenery, but that would have been quite a departure from the task to draw an interior view, if I focused on what happened outside the room. So I modified the idea and imagined the inside of a small wooden hut, looking at a window with an ancient simple chair and a carpet on the floor.

I found the painting difficult because I wasn’t able to draw on precise memory how the light falling into the room would behave. I was quite sure that the window frame would be very dark. I stopped painting quite early because I liked the image and was afraid to spoil it with unrealistically dark accents.

Guided reflections on observed and imaginary interiors

Which studies worked the best and why?

Generally, I’d say the observed studies worked better than the imagined rooms, because the visual information is denser – there are more details of the scene which contribute to the realistic effect. Particularly the first imagined room suffers from too small objects in an apparently huge, empty room. The second imaginary interior in the wooden hut works better, as window, stool and carpet are less lost in space.

With respect to colour, I think the first interior (balcony room, brown) and the fourth interior (dramatic view from hall into living room, Payne’s gray) work best. These are the studies where I feel the least discomfort with the restriction to a single colour. But I’m not sure about this, it may be that these are just the ones where the tonal values are the most rich, and they appear most neutral only in direct comparison to the other chosen colours (dark blue, dark green, pale brown).

If I had to choose one single painting for an exhibition, I would choose the fourth dramatic interior – view from dark hall into light living room, with the grand piano and the large painting in the background. It combines many successful elements: The tonal values are from very light to very dark, it is not overworked with an acceptable degree of irregularity in the tonal areas, and there’s enough detail but not too many objects. This results in something like focusing on the essential. The second most interesting study would be the view towards the balcony in brown. I like its livelyness and the effects of sunlight shining from outside inside the room.

How did the observed studies affect your ability to produce imagined rooms?

The observed studies helped to get a feeling for the degree of contrast resulting from different light situations. Generally, I think they sharpen observational capabilities which helps to build up a memory of „how things look like“, which can then be used as a resource when painting from imagination. But I also realized that I worked rather analytically in the imagined interiors to deduct where the areas of light  would be, based on some theoretical knowledge about perspective and geometry. This may have been a consequence of not having much recent experience with observational painting.

What potential is there for watercolour to convey mood and atmosphere?

I think there is a huge potential. I’m just having the problem of being emotionally too close to my studies to identify what kind of atmosphere they may convey to others. To me, the observational studies are very friendly and capture how much I like the place where I live.
The imagined studies are somewhat different. They convey a feeling of spaciousness which is something I really miss at home. I don’t know in how far this is a consequence of me following task instructions to include only one or two furniture objects. In this respect, the third imaginary study is interesting because it includes only few objects but these are much better able to occupy the image space. The painting is neither too empty nor overloaded with detail as the first observed interior (balcony room).

I think the great potential for conveying mood and atmoshpere has something to do with the chance effects that are inherent in the medium. The irregularities of brush strokes and pigment distribution in the fluid create interesting variations even in plain coloured areas. For the future, I would like to learn how to let more freedom to the medium and make good use of chance effects, instead of trying to control the medium by overpainting in too many layers.

Did you feel constrained by using monochrome?

No, it was actually a relief at this stage of learning for me, because I found it much easier to explore and use the range of tonal values of a single colour than those from multiple colours simultaneously in a single painting. It was only from the resulting painting that I wish I’d be able to extend the palette to include more colours. I do like monochrome paintings but including more colours will help to achieve a more natural, realistic visual effect.

Light and tone

This project focused on tonal analysis. The exercises were quite technical but I enjoyed them a lot because there was still so much space to realize my own ideas, and I felt more and more comfortable with the medium.

Exercise: From light to dark the watercolour way

The task was to practice building up intense tones of a dark colour by painting layers into a grid of 10 small squares. I did this with the five colours of my new artist quality watercolours because I thought it would help me getting to know the colours better. My selection consists of Winsor Yellow, Winsor Red, Burnt Sienna (a warm, medium brown tone), French Ultramarine, Hooker’s Green and Payne’s gray. I made one grid for each of these colours, except yellow.

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It was quite difficult to anticipate the right amount of colour mix I would need, and to mix the colours in an appropriate intensity – not too weak and not too concentrated. I guess this needs a bit more practice. I was surprised by the brown tone which is much lighter than I thought when I selected this colour for my palette. I think I would like to add a darker brown tone. But maybe this will not be necessary if I learn how to obtain darker tones through mixing.

By contrast, the green tone was quite intense. I had noticed this in the studies I made for the previous exercise, and this task confirmed the observation that this is a rather dark green. I could have done a lighter mix, this would probably have resulted in a smoother gradation from light to dark. I liked the exercise, it’s interesting to see how the colour intensity gradually builds up.

Exercise: Tones from a single layer

The task: Arrange max. 5 simple objects and do a tonal study with pencil in the sketchbook, indicating different tonal values with numbers if you like. Then sketch the outlines on A3 or A4 watercolour paper and paint a monochrome study with pre-mixed colours of different tonal values.

P1050238I chose some white pottery objects because I found the variation in white tones interesting. I placed them onto a dark flat table andI used a grey cardboard mat as a background. I enjoyed drawing the arrangement and taking the time to analyse tonal values, although I felt very unsure whether I had classified them correctly.

P1050242Then I proceeded to the painting. I began with what I thought was a very pale tone to indicate the lightest areas – the light reflexes on the objects. The darkest areas were the contour shades of the bowl and the salt and pepper dispensers. I painted the grey cardboard background with an intermediate tone. Then the remainder of the painting consists in attempts to vary between these tones, but this wasn’t very successful, I’m afraid.

Not sure whether the problem was the colour (Payne’s gray) or that I used a brush that was too large, but somehow I obtained almost no variation in tonal values, neither towards the dark nor towards the lighter tones. The tonal variation I obtained is more the result of irregular loads of colour on the brush, instead of different pre-mixed base tones. I think I will follow my tutor’s advice to repeat an exercise if I’m not satisfied. It’s really a learning process and I think I need practice to adapt the technique to the experiences I’m making.

Second attempt: more contrast

In the second study, I reduced the number of tonal areas and the number of tones. This time, I decided to leave the lightest areas as white and mixed a really dark tone for the darkest areas, then an intermediate gray for the mid tones. I achieved stronger contrasts in this painting and the different tones are better distinguishable.

P1050244I think the darkest and the second-darkest tone are too close together, the tone for the table became too dark. Another problem is to cover large areas with an even wash: I used a smaller brush this time because I had difficulties controlling the amount of water with the big brush in the first study. Now the problem was that the smaller brush did not hold enough colour to cover the larger areas of dark colour… The solution will be to use a brush adapted to the size of the area that I want to cover… funny how I seem to prefer using only a single brush rather than changing the brush while working on a single painting to accommodate the task at hand.

The second study represents an improvement, but I think I’ve overdone the contrasts a bit. The first one was pale but the subtlety also has a nice quality in it. Probably the best where is somewhere in between – not too much, but enough contrast. It’s quite tempting to do a third one and see whether I can do this. There’s not enough daylight anymore, I will have to do it with a lamp or wait until tomorrow.

Third attempt: somewhere in between

P1050246This will be the last try for now! I’m quite satisfied this time, contrasts are not so extreme but objects are recognizable. Brushwork still needs improvement and I’m far from really mastering tonal values at first attempt, but the tones are closer to what I intended to do than in the first two studies.
I think it would be a good idea for me to use a separate tryout sheet to test the colour that is on the brush, before applying it to the drawing. This would give me the opportunity to correct the tone, reduce water or whatever I think is necessary, rather than commiting everything directly.

Exercise: Tones in several layers

The task was to paint another monochrome study with the objects and in the same colour as in the previous exercise, but this time another positioning and/or viewpoint on the objects and building up colour intensity in layers, rather than mixing the right colour in advance.

P1050253I had some difficulties deciding on the arrangement, probably my good intentions for the last exercise led to a feeling of saturation with the objects… but finally I found an arrangement I liked. It was in a portrait format and I also changed my viewing position slightly. I took some time to work out a tonal study in pencil, probably invested more effort than task instructions would have demanded, but I was in the mood for fine analysis and preferred to work out the tones rather than just loosely indicating them.

This probably helped with the subsequent painting. I felt much more at ease with this technique than with the previous exercise. Being allowed to paint in layers is much more forgiving. The result is quite successful for the tonal values, I think. But there are two drawbacks of the method.

P1050248The first is that it did not permit to paint tonal gradations within an area and the demarcation lines I drew between tonal areas look artificial. The other is that the overall impression of the study is much more static, less vivid than the previous ones. I think this is because the colour areas become very uniform from multiple layering. There is less room for chance effects and the painting has lost a bit of the charme the earlier studies had.

It may have to do with me making too many layers. Maybe with more practice, less layers are required to obtain the desired tone and then the painting would retain its freshness.

Drawing and watercolour

This project is about combining watercolour painting with drawing. I hadn’t tried this out before and found the results quite interesting.

Exercise: Quick watercolour studies

Task:

  • arrange a simple still life of fruit, vegetables, flowers or a selection of household objects with interesting forms and surfaces
  • divide a large sheet of watercolour paper into areas of A5 size
  • do at least 4 watercolour studies of the arrangement
  • try to detect the broad tonal areas (light, dark and intermdiate tones)
  • use brushes of your choice, work quickly
  • variously focus on tone, line, surface texture
  • don’t be disheartened if things appear to go wrong

Setting up the arrangement and first two studies

My arrangement
–    three onions and a dried corn cob in a braided basket, arranged on a natural white table cloth. Dark grey background from sofa. Perspective is looking from a somewhat elevated point to permit view inside the basket
–    light source from the right, using a lamp. The second light source is my table lamp which I need for painting. It is so close to the arrangement that it softens all the shadows.
–    colours are brown (the basket), dark red (a paper napkin), natural white with green shades (the corn cob), dark grey (sofa background and shades on the table cloth)

I did the first two studies today. I realized that my arrangement was too complicated to be drawn on such a small area (A5). The task is quite difficult and I felt indeed overwhelmed.
Most difficulties were related to getting the proportions of the objects at least approximately right. While it worked ok for the basket form, I did not get the corn cob and the onions right. I thought that a drawing to just sketch forms and positions of objects would greatly help for having some orientation on the paper. I did not dare drawing with paint because I thought the lines would disturb the painting, and I did not know which colour to choose that would be less disturbing.
Second difficulty was with the colours. I used artist quality watercolours from tubes and prepared them in a pallette, but I did not mix them in the tones I needed. I used the pure tones instead. I restricted the palette to four colours: yellow, red, brown and Paynes gray, excluding blue and green. I think the choice of colours works good, only my use of them lacks technical skill. I tried to obtain dark colours and shades by using layers of gray, but this did not work very well.
In the second painting, I did not use yellow and overall used less colours. I think the second study shows some progress because it is less overworked than the first and the colours are less muddy. The shapes are slightly improved too, although the onions are less well defined than in the first study.
For the next studies, I would like to improve the depiction of forms and proportions of objects in the basket. I thought that a pure tonal study would also be helpful, because it doesn’t lead to muddy colours when layers of colours are applied.
What would also help would be to do detail studies of just single objects enlarged. I think my arrangement is too complicated to be painted as small as A5, at least for a beginner. The solution will be to simplify, but that’s difficult to learn.

Four more studies

I made four more studies to complete the reserved spaces on the sheet. I think there are slight improvements from one to the next, in that I gained a bit of confidence with the medium. But I also felt that I kept repeating my errors, rather than improving. For example, I always tried to paint the texture of the basket, but it did not work. Or the darkest shades – they never looked like shades, but instead they were just dark spots that did not integrate into the whole.
But from the first to the last study, I think there is an improvement in coherence of some of the objects. For example, in the first study I think the red paper napkin falls apartwile in subsequent paintings, it becomes more recognizable.

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Overall, the most important instruction seems to have been not to be disheartened if things don’t work out as expected. At least I’m ready for approaching the task with preparatory studies now, rather than wanting to just have a go!

 

Guided reflection

Were you focussing more on colour, tone or line? If you were attempting all at once, was this problematic, if so how?

I was consciously focusing on form, I tried to get the shapes of the objects correctly. I also tried to get the colours approximately right and to include some tonal values. So probably I was more trying everything at once, rather than focusing on anything particular. It was indeed problematic, I think the task was too complex.

In this exercise to what extent were you drawing or painting?

This is a difficult question because I’m not even sure about the difference between drawing and painting. I did begin with a more linear outline of some of the shapes, and maybe my attempts at creating some texture for the corn and the braided basket. The stripe shadows of the table cloth are also more linear elements, so that may have been the drawing elements. I think I painted where I tried to cover larger areas in a single go, like the red napkin or the shadow of the basket on the table.

In which ways did you find working with watercolour effective or problematic in producing these sketches?

I found my use of watercolour mostly problematic, because it didn’t seem to work very well in producing an accurate representation of my arrangement. I preferred using a large brush but this resulted in an inability to draw the fine detail from which I wasn’t able to abstract. Blending of colours didn’t work because I wasn’t able to use the colours wet in wet, so there are hard edges rather than blendings and objects are hardly recognizable.

Assess each picture – which has worked well and why?

The first picture didn’t work at all because neither form nor colour nor tones work together to create coherent objects. The second study works somewhat better because colour contrasts are less extreme so the objects are more recognizable. The third study improves a bit on colour blending and I also had discovered that the corn cob was dark where it went outside of the basket, and light before the darker background of the red napkin inside the basket. The fourth study was a bit hasty, but what I like about it is that it is more spontaneous, less controlled than the earlier attempts.

In the fifth study, I had decided to use the colours in higher intensity, so this is a painting which has more contrast and deeper colours than the earlier ones. I think the basic shape of the corn cob works better here than in earlier studies. The dark tones inside the basket are less successful, but I like the texture on the front of the basket better than in earlier studies.

In the final study I tried to get the tones in the darker areas right, this concerned the left side of the basket before its dark shadow. The corn cob is less successful here and the onions aren’t very recognizable either, but I like the dry brush effect for the background behind the table.

What kind of preparation might have helped you to develop these studies more?

I think drawing would have been a good preparation, especially because I found the forms in the arrangement quite complex and I could have used the drawing to learn and explore how I might simplify shapes and textures. It might also have helped to explore the tonal values before attempting to represent them in colour.

Colour studies using only a single colour might also have helped, firstly to get practice in creating tonal values withut distraction from colour, but also to practice creating shapes and varying between linear elements and broader tonal areas.

Exercise: Pencil and Watercolour

The task was to make two simple drawings of the same arrangement, then paint one image very closely to the lines and exact, and the second paint quickly and loosely.

I enjoyed this exercise, because it felt like an approach to address the earlier problems rather than repeating something which did not work. The first drawing was very satisfying to do because I had really felt a need to sort out the forms of my arrangement and drawing helped to do this. The first drawing was very similar in perspective to the six studies of the previous exercise, maybe the way of looking had become a habit. In the second drawing, I took a different approach, beginning with a broader outline of shapes before getting to the more detailes elements. The effect was that the basket became larger on the space that was available, I think that was an improvement for the composition.

P1050212The first painting took quite a bit of time to complete because I painted several layers to obtain a more even colouring. The darker areas work much better than in the first exercise, they are better placed and more accurate in colour. I think the shapes have also improved.

The second painting was done much faster. I chose a larger brush this time because I realized that the one I had used before could not hold enough paint for the areas I wanted to cover in one go, which resulted in visible brush marks. The larger brush worked much better. I also used lighter colours, and this time I started with the darkest colour (Payne’s gray) rather than with the lightest (yellow). This was more an intuitive than a deliberate choice, but it seemed to have worked quite well. I also took more freedom for the objects’ colours, for example using the gray as a first layer for the corn cob’s outer leaves, then later adding yellow to obtain the sort of pale green. I also took the freedom to work more intuitively and spontaneously with the other colours and I really like the result. It feels like a step into the right direction: More transparency, a faster working style, and a looser overall impression. I forgot to colorize one area of shade below the left handle of the basket, will correct this later on.

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Guided reflections

Did the drawings inhibit your painting or did the outline structure give you greater confidence?

I definitely felt much more confident with the pencil outline structure. I think the confidence was twofold: the process of drawing was a learning experience how objects related to each other. This gave some acquaintance with the arrangement which added to the visual help from the lines.

The first more precise method of fitting wash into pencil outlines can be very useful for some subjects. What did it help to bring out in your drawing?

It was especially helpful for the shapes of the corn leaves. I had analysed that there were shades which defined the forms but had not been able to paint these. With the pencil lines to guide me on the sheet, it finally worked. But the pencil outlines also helped with the overall forms of all objects.

Is the pencil concealed by your paint, or does it act as an accent to your painting?

The pencil lines are more concealed in the first painting because I used more saturated colours. They do shine through in the lighter areas. The second painting was much lighter and used transparency to a greater extent, and the pencil lines are much more visible here. The effect may also be stronger because the colours follow the pencil less exact than in the first, so they are not covered by the drying demarcation lines of watercolour areas

In the second, looser approach, how would you describe the role of the pencil lines?

The pencil lines are like an additional element here, standing out and helping to make the forms recognizable. The effect would certainly be stronger with darker marks, especially with pen and ink.

What are the advantages of the more careful method? What are the advantages of the quick method?

The more careful method permits a more precise definition of forms and colours. Working slowly also permits to work out fine details. By contrast, the quicker method feels much more spontaneous and fresh and gives a lightness to the painting which I appreciate.

Did the pencil drawing require a different kind of looking to the painting? If so what were the differences?

Yes I think the pencil drawing changed the way I analysed the arrangement. While I did the drawing, I tried to get together the loose ends of some lines and to define shapes which would be of a distinct colour. Then while painting, I realized that I could give some adjacent shapes the same colour and was much more confident that I would not loose orientation about the objects’ boundaries. I just waited and added the separating layer of colour later on.

Which of all the studies you’ve made so far has been the most successful?

I think the most successful one has been the last one, employing the loose approach. There are several elements which contribute: The pencil drawing which helped enormously to maintain orientation on the paper. It was also based on the second preparatory drawing which I found had improved the composition by getting a bit closer to the objects.

I had taken the freedom to draw the two studies of this exercise on slightly larger paper in A4 rather than approximately A5, which was much more pleasant to use for the arrangement I had chosen. I think this further improved the overall effect because the basket in the last study has about double the size of the first exercise where the elements look quite cluttered.

Another good element was the larger brush I chose for the final study which helped to fill larger areas much more evenly. It also led to overpainting in some areas but I really liked the effect of unexpected colour mixes which resulted from later layers on top. I think the quicker approach is more open to chance effects and this adds much interest to the painting, compared to the slower, more controlled approach.

Some free practice: Laying washes

My first attempts in part I of the course at laying washes weren’t very successful, so I had kept in mind that I need some more practice on this. I wouldn’t want to „waste“ expensive high quality watercolour paper for this, but would use colour left over from course exercises and some of the less expensive practice paper.
I had a go yesterday with colours left over from the two studies with pencil drawing, and did five washes: Two red, two Payne’s grey, and one yellow. The yellow was the last one and the most successful. I had discovered that it worked better when I added water into the colour on the pallette, rather than just taking up more water onto the brush to mix on the paper. And the yellow colour is more forgiving as well, because the pigment distribution creates less visible stripes on the paper.
I definitely need more practice, but these sheets may serve as simple backgrounds for other studies, so the paper is not wasted.

Exercise: Adding line to watercolour

First study: Interior view with vase of twigs

I made two preliminary studies of an interior view. It is in the living room, a white cabinet with a braided armchair and a vase of long twigs, a painting on the wall in the background. What I found interesting were the tonal values of the white cabinet before the white wall, which were not white at all but more or less shaded.

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The first study includes more of the scene, it shows the entire cabinet and painting on the wall, while the second is a close up, cutting off the bottom and top of the cabinet and showing only a section of the painting. I prefer the colours of the second, but I think it’s more difficult to recognize. I also like the armchair’s shadow on the cabinet.

I thought this was a simple interior before I began but then realized that there’s quite a lot of detail. Especially difficult is the hole in the construction of the armchair through which a bit of background can be seen, in this scene it’s the rim of the vase and the black air cleaner box. But these details are not recognizable and I don’t know how to paint them without making them too important. I’d like to improve the depiction of the cushion on the armchair, make it more different from the background colour. I’d also like to have more three-dimensionality for the twigs. And probably less texture in the armchair.

Later I made another two studies of the subject. I wasn’t at all sure whether I should continue with this subject which I found too difficult, or choose a different one with which the task might work better. I decided to give it a try to get at least to the point of adding line, the central aspect of the task. I tried to work more loosely with the medium in these studies, faster and less controlled, and I think this did improve the overall painting. I like the third study best for the colours, but I think the composition of the fourth is better because it includes less detail. In the third study I added the two other armchairs in the background, in the fourth reduced to a single background chair and I think this works better.

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In the third study, I tried out charcoal for the lines and was quite surprised by the improvement I saw. It felt like an immediate harmony between the painting and the lines, at the same time it added an interesting accent which let the forms come out much better.

For the fourth study, I chose pen and ink for the lines and played a bit with varying line thickness. The deep black of the ink represents a sharper contrast than the soft charcoal lines, and this creates a different overall effect. It changed the painting somewhat into a colorized drawing, where the third study remained more of a painting.

After adding the lines to study four, I reworked the painting a bit and added some shadows behind the twigs and the armchairs, and also added a layer to the floor area, which improved the overall impression. All in all, I think the four studies show a nice development in how I captured the subject. I would like to have another go for this exercise, but with a different subject. Maybe not an interior view but rather a simple still life. I also thought about the plant next to the living room window. Will decide next time that I can work on the topic.

A second topic to study: the plant

P1050224I made two more paintings and chose the plant at the window for my subject. I liked how the green watercolour almost naturally evolved into the leave shapes with lighter and darker tones. The first painting was on the white paper background and I just added some shadows behind the leaves.

For the second painting, I first laid a wash in light Payne’s gray and then painted the green leaves on top. The effect confirms what I felt earlier when experimenting with washes, the uniform background colour gives coherence to the picture. The wash itself was not very successful, rather stripey and irregular and I found this unvoluntary texturing disturbing, it did not support the picture of the plant. Maybe I’d better use a sponge to obtain a more even distribution of colour. The second study included the cabinet on which the plant stood, and I chose a portrait format instead of landscape as for the first. I think both aspects were improvements in the composition, although the overall painting is still quite empty.

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There seems to be a process of gradually letting go, exerting less control and trying to be more spontaneous (a contradiction as such…). I don’t know whether it is visible in the paintings but I’m beginning to get a feel for what the medium does by itself when I am able to let go. I haven’t yet included line, I think I will do two more studies as with the first set, then add lines. It’s as if I need some time to warm up with the subject first before I dare adding lines.

Two more plant studies

P1050227For the third study, I changed perspective and included more of the background: The cabinet, the white window frame with dark glasses (because it was night), the sofa cushions in the foreground and the loose contours of the heating element. I think this is quite a successful painting because I began working with colour intensity. I was very cautious with adding line because the painting was already with many linear details and I did not want to overdo it.

So overall I was quite satisfied with the painting, but was aware that it did not quite meet what the task was about: doing a quick study and using line to integrate more structure. This is why I decided to have another go, trying to let go of detail and leave out all the background, focus on the plant. I had the idea of doing the greenery in a more bold approach and then use line to recreate the shapes of the leaves.

P1050230For the fourth study, I placed the plant on a flat table before the white wall and found that I might well try a light green wash as a basis. Following the actual lighting, I made the colour fade towards the upper left corner. I think the wash is a bit too pale to be visible, but I worked in the evening with lamp light and the impression may be different in daylight.

I had realized that the third study was not at all a fast sketchy study, so this time I wanted to try a more fluent approach and later use line to add structure. I began with a very yellow green tone and changed the colour to increasingly more intense and dark green. I had great difficulties with the leave shapes. Somehow I cannot focus on single stems or leaves and am very quickly confused and overwhelmed by the details. I made a quick pencil outline sketch on the wash ground which helped a bit, but overall I felt quite lost.

After the leaves, I added the blue and dark gray colouring of the pot. As a last step I added line using pen and ink. I had the intention of making the forms clearer but I think this wasn’t very successful. Considered as a task of accurate representation, there are many many errors and loose ends – a problem that keeps reappearing when I try to draw what I see.

I like the painting for the variety of greens and think that I made some progress in mixing colours. I also like that the subject is focused on what I found most relevant of the chosen topic. Areas to improve are that of visual analysis – either getting the object objectively correct, or be truely expressive and abandon trying to depict actual details in favour of a more generous approach.

Some reflections

I think it is a bit problematic that I paint in the evenings, because the lamp light changes the quality of colours. Maybe this is why I tend to have very broken and pale colours in my paintings – simply a reflection of the bad lightning conditions I have for working. One idea is to improve the lighting. Actually I have enough lamps, but maybe I have to assemble even more in the room where I paint. Another idea is to deliberately exaggerate colour intensity. Not sure whether I like this. I think I’d prefer to change habits and work more with daylight. Unfortunately this will only be possible on week-ends when I am free during daytime.

I also realized that I have taken up a suggestion by my tutor: She recommended doing several studies of a single subject and when the painting becomes overworked, then start a new one. This would give me the necessary practice to learn what is essential and what is superfluous. I have done this without being aware of it since the beginning of the project. When I look at the progression that is visible from one study to the next, I’m quite impressed. It’s not that I made huge progress, it is more a mental thing of becoming more attentive to what I’m doing and how the medium behaves.

My tutor also recommended that I’d have another go when I wasn’t satisfied with the result of an exercise. The latter is something I consciously took on board, although I’m aware of a problem with the time I can allocate to each exercise. It’s a bit unfortunate that the course contains so many worthwhile exercises which definitely merit several tries to become better at the task, but then the aim of completing one project per week on average becomes quite utopical. Officially I’m on a break anyway, so I thought I might use a more relaxed approach.

It’s really a relief not having any deadline for completion of a course part, instead just taking the time it needs to work through the tasks in a satisfying manner. Maybe I can negotiate this when I resume coursework officially in April – that I’d prefer to agree on a submission date when I reach the end of the last project in the course part. I have enough self-discipline to work without a fixed deadline and I think I will benefit from feeling less pressurized by some arbitrary finalization date. I’ll think about this and review the idea after some time of free working. After all, it is possible that I decide that I cannot afford the time to do this while working on the dissertation. But for the moment, this helps to keep me sane, so I will continue.

Guided reflection: Assessment of what I have found out about drawing into painting

I think I discovered that I employed two different approaches to watercolour painting: one was to paint everything quite detailed and use colour to separate areas from another. The other was to paint more loosely and use line to make the structure come out better. The latter approach supports a more spontaneous mode of working with watercolour, which I think is quite appropriate for the medium.

I was surprised how well adding lines supported the paintings. Adding line is really an interesting technique and I’m looking forward to exploring it further in part 3 of the course. Nevertheless I think that even the bold approach might benefit from preliminary pencil studies. I have the recurring problem of producing loose ends and undefined shapes and I think drawing would help me to sort out what I see. I did not make preparatory drawings because I wanted to follow instructions but I would like to integrate this into regular practice.

Tutor report: Assignment 1

Overall Comments

Hello Patricia, thank you for submitting your work for Assignment 1. You have made a very good start to the course and have submitted 5 folders, one for each project in part 1 and a sketchbook.  You use good quality watercolour paper for all exercises and your work is clearly labelled and well presented.

Feedback on assignment Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Quality of Outcome, Demonstration of Creativity

Project 1. Mixing and applying watercolour.

It’s essential to develop as wide a repertoire as possible of marks and awareness of the boundaries of what you can achieve with different brushes and materials. You have experimented well with loading your brush, varying the depth of tone and creating a range of marks. Well done. You have created a very competent shoal of fish and the leaves sketch has leaves of varying tone. You have completed the exercise where you are required to wash off the leaves competently. I think the final layer of leaves could have benefited from having a little more pigment in order to create more depth between the layers.

Project 2. Laying washes.

These exercises represent some of the basic building blocks of watercolour painting and take practice to achieve well. Your first flat wash is very even, well done. Your tonally graded washes don’t have enough gradation in them though the second attempt is better. It is perhaps easier to achieve this with a dark colour. Start with a very intense dark blue and practice getting it completely clear by the bottom of the page.

The mixed wash requires two colours of paint, and by combining them in the middle you achieve a third colour. I think you need to practice these a little more Patricia. This is starting to work but what you achieve at the bottom of the painting should be around the centre, and the cross over between the phtalo blue in the the middle section needs to be smoother, no obvious lines. It is definitely improving in your second attempt and you will have the opportunity to keep practicing this the more you paint.

Project 3. Resist techniques.

You have experimented very thoroughly with the wax and oil pastel resist Patricia, well done. The experimentation with the masking fluid has worked well too and has produced interesting images. I still think you can afford to use stronger colours for your washes. Try to get more pigment in your initial wash rather than over layering at this stage. It’s good practice to learn to control the paint in an individual layer before moving onto overlaying several washes. It might be worth you buying 2 or 3 artist quality pans of watercolour, if you are currently using student quality paints, just so that you can see the difference in the quality of the paint. The pigment is much richer in artist quality paints.

Your research with the madras cloth is complex and a worthwhile exercise. It looks like you have learnt a lot from trying out the gum Arabic and the gouache in this way too. You are starting to get some very nice qualities. Your experimenting is starting to pay off. Well done.

Project 4. Making marks in different ways.

Again you have worked thoroughly here Patricia and have closely followed the instructions, well done. You have initially tried a variety of brushes on two different types of paper. I agree with you that the second blue attempt on the textured paper is more interesting and can understand why you find it distracting to think about specific clouds when trying out different brush strokes. You are beginning to capture definite movement and energy in your tree paintings. The third set of paintings might have benefited from more white space between marks or, again, more variation in the depth of colour in order to clearly see the variety of mark making. In fact you note this yourself in your blog and you also identify that you might benefit from some artist’s quality paints. Your notes on layers of paint application with the final tree painting are observant regarding letting the paint dry between applications. Your seascape in blue tones uses lifting off very well and has successfully captured an essence of the cloud formations.

Using a variety of brushes and tools.

You have tried three different brushes, lifting off and have gone onto try different tools. (If you do more than one painting on a day and don’t have a title, remember to date and number it so that I can refer to it).

I think you could have pushed yourself a little more in this section, particularly the surfaces and textures but you will have opportunities to do this throughout the course. Keep your mind open to the use of alternative brushes and tools as you progress with the course and remember to experiment regularly to develop you marks to use in your vocabulary of watercolour techniques.

Research Point.

You have done extensive research for this section, looking at artists including watercolour painters and a variety of styles of painting. You have given your own thoughts on the artists’ work and on one occasion you have recreated the work in pencil crayon. This is a very worthwhile exercise and is also worth doing in watercolour. In this way you can explore the techniques that artists use to create works that you admire and may wish to incorporate in to your own painting style and vocabulary. To push your research further you need to explore further how the works link into your own painting and progress.

Assignment 1.

You have sent several samples of preparation work with your final piece. In this prep work you consider three different compositions, different media and different styles. I think you would have benefited from doing close up work in the pencil sketches before moving on to the watercolour work. This would help you to make sure that you really look at what you are trying to capture and to make a clear attempt at the tonal qualities and the shadow on the cloth. I think you can afford to explore the use of the pencil, and perhaps darker pencils. The range of blacks and greys you can get from a 6B pencil for example are extensive. Try to be a little more expressive in your lines too, try working quite quickly in some of your sketchbook work and see what you capture. We are looking for self-expression and emotion as well as accurate renditions of objects. You will benefit across all areas of creative work from developing your drawing skills and I can see you have a competent drawing style already for recording basic shapes and positioning. You can afford to work bigger too and to be much braver and bolder in your drawing and mark making. ( I have just seen your other drawing prep work on the blog, I think it is a good idea to send all the prep work you have done for an assignment).

Your close up water colour work of the lemons and the pomegranates could also be pushed further too and you already have some very nice brush strokes and accidental qualities in the experimentation work with the close up fruit. In the pomegranates top left you are beginning to show some of the intensity of colour that is possible with watercolour. The yellow wash also works well on the top right piece. I think you could have experimented with more intense colour in the background too and again the shadows and tonal qualities could have been explored further at this stage.

Here is a study of dragon fruits by Elizabeth Blackadder. It is from this link where the image is at a better resolution. http://pinkpagodastudio.blogspot.co.uk/2011/09/dame-elizabeth-blackadder.html

Elizabeth Blackadder - Dragon Fruit

You can see how she captures delicacy and intensity of colour through the medium of watercolour. A way of working towards this is to do several versions of the painting. As soon as it starts to become overworked, start again.  As you progress you begin to work out what it is essential to include and what is superfluous, but it does take quite a few versions when you are just starting out.

The colour study. I think this is quite successful. The actual fruits lack a little detail, but you have captured tonal qualities, and have tried an interesting wash on the background which I think works well with the pomegranate. You are right to think that the tablecloth would have worked better without the black lines. They at least need to get thinner and paler as they go towards the back. The shadows need more careful observation. I am pleased you are trying to incorporate what you have learnt from looking at Nolde’s work into your own painting here and have experimented with a new approach. This is also similar to Gaugin’s approach.

Your final painting, has some nice qualities but does not have the tonal boldness that your prep works have, It is more contolled than the prep work and loses it’s energy because of this, the loss of water marks particularly in the table cloth and background miss out on using the medium and it’s unique qualities. The composition would also have benefited from stronger directional light to pull out the tonal qualities and the shadows. The positioning of the fruit makes it look a little lost on the page. Look back at Nolde’s work again, for example, and consider how he frames his subject.

Sketchbooks Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Demonstration of Creativity

Thanks for including your sketchbook. Your sketch book work will need to be much more comprehensive in future parts of the course.

I recommend you also

  • Develop your drawing skills with daily practice
  • Extend the use of your sketchbook by working in a variety of media and doing original first hand observational drawings and sketches. These often become research work for eventual paintings.
  • Use your sketchbook for comprehensive working out of visual ideas prior to any painting.
  • Keep a variety of sizes of sketchbook including a small pocket sketchbook which you keep with you at all times.

Here is an example of how to use a sketchbook to research your ideas through drawing.

http://www.weareoca.com/fine_art/inside-sketchbooks-as-a-form-of-enquiry/

Learning Logs or Blogs/Critical essays Context

Thank you for sending your blog link. It is logically presented. It relates well to your exercises and shows evidence of self-reflection.

In terms of reflection, here is an article that looks briefly at different depths of reflection,

http://www.weareoca.com/education/learning-logs/

I would say your reflection is similar to point no. 3 on the whole. To push this further, to no.4, you need to think about and note how you are going to develop your own work and how the work is influenced by other artists’ work. ( You have just started to do this in assignment one). Where does your work sit in relation to the world of art that has already happened or is happening right now.  That is something to think about over the coming months of the course as you begin to work on developing your own unique voice.

Suggested reading/viewing Context

After looking through the artists that you have researched on your blog another artist that comes to mind is Elizabeth Blackadder. You can see some examples of her work here on the OCA Student media resources page. Use the password and user name to login to the site as given on the Bridgeman link page. Here are two examples. The site has several.

http://www.bridgemaneducation.com/ImageView.aspx?result=12&balid=370113

http://www.bridgemaneducation.com/ImageView.aspx?result=5&balid=50704

Still worth a look for the composition of the image though. Another artist to look at is Hutchins-Puechavy. Here is an example of her lily paintings.

http://www.bridgemaneducation.com/ImageView.aspx?result=31&balid=248157

As the research point on page 44 suggests I think it is good at this stage for you to look at a variety of artists, as you are doing, and make notes about what you do and don’t like in their work. If you look at the library images provided online via the oca webpage – there are hundreds of watercolours to look at. You are also visiting galleries to look at work first hand which is essential.

Karen Armitage and Elizabeth Blackadder and Claudia Hutchens-Puechavy, as I have mentioned above, are all worth a look at as 20th century watercolour painters.

Excellent that you have seen work first hand in the gallery and have benefited from this. Try to keep this up.

Pointers for the next assignment

  • Do lots of drawing practice as well as painting
  • Don’t feel you can only do each exercise once, do it until you are happy with it, try lots of versions if you need to.
  • Try to use a wider range of intensity of colour in your water colour paint. Don’t be frightened of using intense colours. This can work very well  wet on wet too. Consider using artist’s quality paints. The tube paints you have bought may be artist;s quality , you don’t specify?
  • Continue to do the research work as outlined in the course booklet, as you have, plus your own research work as necessary for the development of your ideas and include this research in your log book.
  • Remember to show how your research feeds in to you rown ideas and experimentation.

I hope you will find this feedback useful Patricia as you move onto part 2 of the course. Any questions regarding the feedback here or your progress in Part 2 email me.

 

Tutor name: Lisa O’Brien
Date 12/11/12
Next assignment due To be agreed – Patricia is taking a short break to complete a Masters.

 

Miscellaneous: Taking a break

I’ve now prepared the parcel with Assignment 1 for sending to my tutor Lisa, and this will mark a break point in my course work. I will take some time off OCA coursework for personal and professional reasons. I’m planning to resume OCA studies in April 2013.

I’m not glad about the decision but I realized that I need to finish some other projects first before I can fully commit to studying art. I’ve only started the watercolour course 2 months ago, but it has already become part of my life, and I’ll miss it.

Not quite sure whether I’ll be able to do some “secret” work just for myself, like just experimenting when I have some leasure time. I might write update articles to the blog from time to time.

Bye bye for now.